flocks of gold
riveting the
good morning
i am more than
a wanderer
on the road of
massive trees and
faith as big as
the biggest wound
given more
i am given
magnificent italics
of honest endearment
those capitalĀ letters
of branded friendships
and priceless attentions
in upper cases of
lover’s alphabets
in the end
there is a true
force that comes out
and comes out to say
thank you
2013
This is beautiful …
thanks a lot
You’re making me feel like a pessimist! Thanks for posting some positive energy. This is lovely
Hi Jo! I’m surprised how this affects you with all the positive energy and thanks for making you optimistic!
“faith as big as the biggest wound”
… Ahh I wish to be able to write a line like this one some day!
Hi Marisha!
All things are possible and even right now you can try writing better than what I have written
wish you the best in blogging!
Thanks for your wish
I was just going through your poems… they are truly beautiful and best is, they convey much in so few words.
I’m thankful you really appreciate my poetry! Looking forward to your works
Nicely done.
many many thanks!
yeaaaa
Wow. This is so good. I especially love the first stanza. It really leaves a beautiful picture in the mind and a warm feeling in the heart.
Hi Dieu!
Thanks for visiting again and liking this in particular. I guess I haven’t had those moments to write poetically how much i wanna say “thank you” in a most unique way. Hope this sounds really genuine
It does
Great Chester I like the second para most
Thanks Ajinkya! Happy blogging to you!
Great word play! Looking forward to look through your blog more!
Thanks and happy blogging to you!
You too, dear!