sigh oh sigh
say, “love comes”
so romantic
so abrupt
i feel the intense arrows
hitting my heart and moving me
on the aisle of a wedding banquet
each stride i take
are slow footsteps of a birth
in the act of true love
as east meets west then
the party started
we turn soft whispers into
a big noise like a public display
witnessing to the crowd
and these vows we utter
are the killer whales of
all disasters
2013
“We turn soft whispers into a big noise like a public display” – this. Right here. Top quality.
oh thanks so much! thanks for your precious comment. really appreciate it
made me smile today 
Interesting. I am still pondering the last three lines and wondering what it means. That’s when you know you’ve written a good poem – - when others are sitting there before work trying to figure it out!
thanks…those lines were so random
Very nice and unique:
“and these vows we utter
are the killer whales of
all disasters”
thanks
I agree with the above – thought the last lines very clever
thanks Reikiheidi
nice imagery !!!! …whales..represent weight or impact of the word or action XD in my opinion
yeah Hussain…thanks for liking and dropping-by
I have to agree with several of the comments: your last three lines are great.
Reblogged this on Women Terrace and commented:
good one
I love your poetry! You are an amazing writer!
oh, thanks!
The last three lines, def have a deep edge, random they may be… but… the real masterful part of this piece, imo
each stride i take
are slow footsteps of a birth
in the act of true love
as east meets west then
the party started
Oh where do I even start with that…? Nicely done.
Hi Daphne. Thanks for making an effort to read my poems and to bother writing comments on them. Much appreciated
enjoy blogging! 
It’s not much effort. You got skillz my poetic bro. xoxo.