i am indifferent in a different world
bullying the buffalo in the water
i am slowly charging the wilder me
trapping the embarrassed fireflies
i am minding my own business
silencing the noise of the frogs
i am charging what is abnormal
leaving the world in her crazy hour
2013
That is beautiful Chester and from your words I can see that you are truly not an indifferent man. You really care.
xx
This one has so many fabulous lines in it…one of my favorites was “trapping the embarrassed fireflies..”
“i am minding my own business
silencing the noise of the frogs”
and that’s how it always should be.
this touched me – gave me a lot to think about. thank you.
Very nice!!! i love the play on words
Awesome
I love the detail- fireflies, buffalo- but I’m not sure of the overall direction of the poem.
I love the surreal language and the unusual imagery. Reminds me a bit of Audre Lord’s “power.” Thanks for the follow, I look forward to sharing work.
thanks for the compliment, that is so encouraging! happy blogging and wish you the best in blogging!
Amazing indeed. Thanks visiting my poem.
lovely crafting… i do like this one… slowly charging the wilder me… thanks for sharing and for liking some of mine, too
it’s an opportunity to read yours and you have the skill in writing! happy blogging!
I’m enjoying it no end! It’s great to find other wannabe wordsmiths out there.. out here… wherever we are! Thanks again!
Ahhh, I found your follow button at last! Every day that you learn something new is a good day!
I really like this. “bullying the buffalo in the water” Great line!