Two fleets of sunflower summers
On this floating heat
I beat the devil’s carnage
Masquerading on heavy distress
I paraded a replica of grief
They own me not, they cannot ponder
Of killing me but keeping me under
The surveillance of their hate and eyes
Two fleets of sunflower summers
Have threatened my inner burrow
It’s a matter of jealousy
And many jealousies have plundered
Most privacy of personal secrets
I see, I feel the quiet upsets
Ripping my thoughts in seven pieces
Dark circles from their eyes
They cannot sleep on my triumph
To prevail is not always a sin
I’ve manifested cheerful spectacles
They’ve ended in tolerated torture
2012
stopped by to thank you and take a look at your writing…this one made me think, love poetry that makes you stop and ponder. nice job, thanks for sharing
thanks for stopping by here, too 🙂 we’ll definitely share and read each others poetry! I wish you the best in everything that you passionately pursue! 🙂
great poem,captivating throughout 🙂
thanks for liking it and dropping by here 🙂
Thank you very much for stopping by my post and following my blog. I find this poem and ‘Standing alone in my world..’ wonderful. Hope to explore more of your blog.
Your poetry creates the rare and perfect balance between concrete and abstract. I love the captivating imagery and provoking thoughts. You’re very talented.
thanks for dropping by and for commenting, too 🙂
amazing use of words and and great flow 🙂
thank you for liking and for commenting. i really appreciate it! 🙂
Deep. May I reblog?
Sure 🙂
My thanks. 🙂
No worries 🙂
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