It’s over
No happy ever after
Our fairytale is satire
Ending where we
Cannot start good
It’s nothing
Everything is hollow
Dead and consuming
We cannot start good
Ending is ending
Most of us
Torn our hearts
We cannot gain
Losing is more than this
Our breaking breaks
Taking easily, slowly
Masking the hurts
Our pretense is an epilogue
It’s more than goodbye
Parting is not our lullaby
2012
I can feel your words completely, this is so intensely beautiful.
thanks for the kind comment! 🙂
nice use of words chester. good post! 🙂
thanks for liking and for the kind comment! 🙂
Great post and very evocative. Really like this 🙂
thanks for taking the time to read my poem and also for your kind comment! 🙂
lol, seems we have all suffered some little hiccups in our dreams lately…carry on. I have faith
yeah, indeed! 🙂
i am feeling this
thanks Jixi 🙂
Chester I can really feel this poem……wonderfully written……..thank God it is not my present reality 🙂 Thanks for liking my Mother’s Day post and for deciding to follow my blog “Unwalled”…..I am truly honored. I will be checking out more of your writings…….all the best!….Kim
You’re welcome Kim. Thanks for dropping-by too! I hope you’ll write more beautiful works of ARTS 🙂 You made me smile with your comment as well 🙂
I liked this one. Thanks for viewing my stuff. Welcome aboard.
thanks for liking this one and for dropping by and commenting! 🙂
This poem is really good!
thanks Mikojose, your comment made me smile again 🙂 thanks for dropping by too! 🙂