Whisky whispers tickle my ears
Intoxicating me completely
The danger is inevitable
Antithesis to self is separation
I am beguiled at your song
Where a hymn begins
The lyrics are real
You can sing better verses
You drill my innermost
I am filled with heavenly chords
Bringing me to the deepest core
I’ve listened to an overnight overture
2012
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chester maynes 
Some great lines in this one, Chester.
thanks Julia for dropping by and liking my poem! 🙂
Love this Chester…love it like crazy! Every line is so well written, I can’t pick a favourite. Gorgeous~R
thanks for liking this one! thanks for dropping by and for commenting, too! 🙂
this one needed a comment…I try to take the time, but as you know…writing sometimes eats up our reading & commenting, this was so good I just needed to take the time 🙂
One word>>>Amazing<<>>Great Insight<<>>Keep it up<<< Camgal
thank you very much for liking this one and for making an effort to read my poetry and commenting! 🙂
Welcome. The best works have to be shown the most appreciation. 😉
beautiful musical metaphor:)))
many thanks David for liking this again! 🙂
I concur with the above comments completely.
thanks for dropping by and for taking the time to comment! 🙂
Stunning!
nice…i dig this…we both go for interesting titles…you are just too cool.
hi Jixi, thanks for dropping by and for liking this one! 🙂
The first line brought me in, really liked the imagery. “Whisky whispers…”
thanks Danny for liking my poem! 🙂
Very nice! (hee, hee…..”whisky whispers tickle my ears”…..this is great!)
many thanks for the like and for dropping by here! really appreciate taking your time to comment on this! 🙂