Fairy tales are born on books
Prince and princesses aren’t fading
Every reader sits down on nooks
Pages are turning and turning and turning
One light invites other lights
Groping the shades of the earth
Heartbreaks are pain and blights
Leaving us like a surplus birth
It’s unfair to live in poverty and lack
When the rest have silvers in their mouth
Everything went blue and black
Tell me what these all about
Hounds pester hounds
The palace is too wide for intimacy
We skip and cross some bounds
Building these hush and privacy
2012
I love the title. And I really liked this one! 🙂
thanks for liking this one! 🙂
i like this too, full of unexpected pitch. and the title is really nice.
thank you for liking this poem! thanks for the comment! 🙂
clever chester ! 🙂
oh thanks! 🙂
When the rest have silvers in their mouth
The palace is too wide for intimacy
I especially like these two lines.
i’m thankful for your liking my poem especially some lines on it! 🙂
This is beautiful! I hope I share your talent! 🙂
thanks Gian Carlo for liking this! 🙂
“It’s unfair to live in poverty and lack When the rest have silvers in their mouth”–how true isn’t it? this disparity in life? I’m glad you could write about this social issue hitting the sour note without sacrificing the poetic tone!
thank you! 🙂
Dear Chester
Life is beautiful as it is. The odds adds the beauty in life as we sail along with it. Beautiful poem…pleasant day ahead.
thank you very much! 🙂
This is beautiful. I love reading your poems!
thanks! 🙂
Very cool, it feels a little different then your more recent stuff. Favorite –
“Hounds pester hounds
The palace is too wide for intimacy”
Danny, again so thankful you’re appreciating my poems! 🙂