i see a remnant
of your sex
a liquid of coke
on the surface
of this bed
so much life
that it transfigures
my absence to
a strong tide
It is my honor to give you this: http://littlefurrow.wordpress.com/2012/06/09/cheers-third-award-post/
thank you jymiely! 🙂
I like the unpunctuated simplicity of this
Glad you like my poem. It came to me last night when I once again could not sleep.
i’ve appreciated it so much! thanks for taking the time to read my poems, too! 🙂
Wonderful! I nominated you for the Beautiful Blogger Award http://www.camgal.wordpress.com/camgals-1st-award/
thanks for the nomination! 🙂
Have you ever read anything by Irving Layton? This poem is reminiscent of his work. Simply wonderful. Good work and thanks for sharing it :).
always my pleasure to share the beauty of what I write. thanks for dropping by and commenting, i truly appreciate this! 🙂
love this poem!
thanks DT for loving this! 🙂
Beautiful poem !
And thanks for following my blog. I really appreciate your “likes”. Because your words are more powerful than mine. 😉 Have a great day !
Oh, thanks for the compliment. I’m glad you liked my poem! Don’t worry, we have all these work of Arts that make us great and will reach out this world! 🙂
Beautiful. Nothing more needs to be said. Finger snaps to you.:)
thanks Shirley for liking this! 🙂
Very nice, 🙂 Thanks for liking my the post on sextails!
Many thanks too! 🙂
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