He stares at the
billion numbers inscribed
on a graffiti wall
and counts the
tiny seahorses
sketched to the left
He remembers his
childhood when
all left was nothing
but white crayons
inside the pockets
of his handbag
Those bullies tried
to put worms
on his head
but the teacher
saw them before
they attempted
He never went back
to those memories again
but visited their graves
who died at 9/11 bombing
He cried at nights
but never to his wife
who defiled their
bed with adultery
He is not aware
that she bore
their second child
from another man
The neighbors know
but he doesn’t
and they shake their
heads as the child
calls him “Daddy!”
He is my colleague
but he never smiles
until one day
he told me
facts that I
need to know
2012
How sad
yeah, i tried to write this narrative poetry, hope it worked well! 🙂 thanks for liking this! 🙂
Sad. You portrayed the memories well, from childhood to maturity.
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Wow, you are very deep. Well done.
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definitely my pleasure
very deep. Good.
thanks Lamberta!
WOW . LOVELY !I sympathise with the guy really sad memories mainly the conjugal betrayal.
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I enjoyed this, would like to see it pared down. but good ideas and nicely done.
Jim
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Great job as always I love your writing and how you give a vivid picture of what your saying. keep up the good work. your very gifted
many thanks for liking this…i am encouraged with your kind comment! this made me smile today! 🙂
well I’m glad that I was able to be helpful. and your welcome.
very well done 🙂
thanks Irene! 🙂
Heart-wrenching and graceful. I love this one.
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Quite sad poem keep up the good work and thanks for following my blog 🙂
you’re welcome and thanks to you, too! good luck to your writing! 🙂
sad! makes one feel very bad for the imaginary man in the poem…
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I, too, have friends like this. Seing someones life from the outside. Thanks for letting me in.
yeah, we need to sympathize with them sometimes! 🙂
Yes. I’ve also BEEN there. Wish someone had noticed MY pain. This really was a thoughtful peice.