Lonely is tonight
when eyes are shut
from autumn lights
of little ninjas
fighting over silver
swords of disneyland
It hits me like november
when all saints day
is queuing for giant pumpkins
and there i am sitting
on a chair of desolate
absent from the crowd
of hide and seek lovers
I love the beginning of the second stanza . Very nice.
thanks Alicia for dropping-by and liking this one! 🙂
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thanks for the nomination! 🙂
You’re welcome. Good writing deserves recognition!
No matter how many of your poems that i read, i can’t get enough!! This one is no different!
thanks for enjoying all my poetry! I really appreciate it! 🙂
You are really one talented guy!
thanks Gian, you made me smile tonight! 🙂
Really like the inclusion of the ninja line, so very good.
thanks for liking this one! 🙂