don’t know what’s going on
my oblivion is a ligament
distracting my thoughts
everything is forgotten
how i tried to remember
how i tried to recall
but everything is vague
even as i poured all
my strength in replaying
things that could let me
evoke memories of us
but nothing in mind
all thoughts are gone
nothing is left, nothing remains
2012
chester maynes 
quite a soothing flow went along this poem. hmmm KUDOS.
I like these lines…
how i tried to remember
how i tried to recall
It’s like how I try to remember actors in movies I am watching, trying to remember other movies I seen them in. Those are my fun times when watching movies.
Oh yeah, Jimi…your connection to this poetry is remarkable and practical…thanks for appreciating this also! 🙂
you wrote jimi…lol. it’s jixi. well I appreciate your work.
oh yeah, sorry haha, my typo error Jixi 🙂
Even the rhythm of this is perfect, like a slow drip, a mind numbed (by pain or circumstance?) trying to function. I really like this; my emotions are with you, here.
~ Lily
Thanks Lily for another appreciation of this poem that you’ve shown 🙂
Could be good for breaking hearts of those who hurt…lol
oh yeah…I hope you felt the emotions of this poem! thanks for liking this one! 🙂
I did, emotions are always different… and yes I loved its flow.
“…my oblivion is a ligament distracting my thoughts”….this is such an intelligent way to express yourself. Inspirational!
I’m glad to hear that and thanks for giving me an opportunity to be encouraged by your good comment! 🙂
Poetry is my passion and i do read poems from the core of being.
I think commenting gives a good insight to the poet.
When i see beauty in words, i feel the poet shud know. If it leaves an impact, it shud be well-appreciated. 🙂
Totally agree there! 🙂