bull is the teacher
lamb is the lover
I’m an aching poet
scratching my sonnet
breaking hearts
louder larks
heavy sighs
questions and why’s
na na na na
she went to China
sailing away
cold is the bay
rest me
somebody and we
are in love
we’re not mad
2012
scratching my sonnet– love it.
thanks for loving it! 🙂
that line made me smile. Not sure if that is what you intended but a great play on the words and action
I was just having fun with all the freedom and democracy of poetry writing! 🙂 I hope I made the right choice of posting and sharing this one! 🙂
yes of course you did!!
ha! this one is fun, nice play on words and thinking out the box. 😉
i’m trying to enjoy the freedom of poetry-writing, haha! 🙂 thanks for liking this one! 🙂
different and nicely written..
thanks and I hope you enjoyed it! 🙂
sure:)
Awwwww..! Loved this excellent piece of share.\m/ 🙂
-Rahul
Hi Rahul!
Thanks for dropping-by and liking this! 🙂
I’m an aching poet
scratching my sonnet
really liking that
Thanks Ian 🙂
I am nominating you for Inspiring Blogger Award, It’s great to see this much poetry and passion in a blog!
http://lizbethwrightbooks.wordpress.com/2012/07/29/inspiring-blogger-award/
thanks for the nomination! 🙂
Amusing. 🙂
Quite enjoyed it.
thanks so much for liking this too! 🙂
very playful poem. I like. 🙂
thanks again 🙂
We are in love, we’re not mad- that was a flawless finish. I love your writing style, it’s simple, yet so tangible. You say a lot without saying too much, I envy that! Awesome work
Xoxo
-Jazz
ohh, thanks for complimenting my style but i have a lot more polishing here 🙂
You’re quite welcome! :]
I love this !!
thanks for loving this one! 🙂