pelvic pains
helmet hedging
a dosage of
boredom pills
lunatic iris
from spectacles
chronic shielding of
california skins
boomerang bangs in
alcoholic stance and
skewing tongues for
gossiping me
out-of-tune
lullabies on
cinderella nights
this is a conclusion
butchered zodiac signs
tell me pornographic
twilights of hollywood
burning to popularity
2012
really liking the last stanza
lunatic iris.. what imagery you pull in this piece. I love waking up and seeing you (and Ian) in my google reader.
I’ve nominated you for the Liebster award. check out my page for details!
You have great style and form. This poem is really powerful and full of imagery, with each line crafted so that your mind darts from concept to concept. Really good.
I’d love if you could leave me some feedback on some of my stuff on my blog sometime! But, I just wanted to let you know that you really have a talent, and profound way of writing.
This is my favorite of yours! Love the surreal imagery.
thanks for your appreciation! 🙂
You have written wonderful article. Greetings and thank you
Thanks very much! 🙂