they hurt
they hide
deeper
in the dark
grotesque
benign
to this flesh
they flirt
they play
better
than vultures
inside them
are my enemies
they traded me
they hurt
they hide
they run
they die
2011
they hurt
they hide
deeper
in the dark
grotesque
benign
to this flesh
they flirt
they play
better
than vultures
inside them
are my enemies
they traded me
they hurt
they hide
they run
they die
2011
ooooo like it…..dark and snarky
Hi Laurie!
Thanks so much! 🙂
Chester
very good that was fast to read yet said a lot
thanks for visiting my blog! 🙂
I like this one and I’m able to understand what your are conveying. Some of your poems have been obscure to me; the blame for this offen lies with the reader and not the writer! The more, seemingly, simplistic your poems are the harder I have to work. Perhaps, I’m just lazy! but I will continue the effort.
Thanks Leo for visiting my blog and for liking this 🙂
I enjoyed very much
Thank you very much! 🙂
Very visual in its simplicity!
oh yeah…thanks for dropping by and for leaving your comment 🙂
Nice! 🙂
well written piece!
thanks bro! 🙂
anytime keep up the good work