morbid brainwaves
on painless suicide
prancing inside this
head
warming
the blood on
my cold nape
i solicited
a quiet
meditation on this
total misunderstanding
of myself and mind
so silly i’ve let a
demeaning imagination
crumple my neat bed
so silly i’m lethally soft
so silly i’m literally alone
2012
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Hi there! Just wanted to let you know that you’ve been nominated the “One Lovely Blog Award.” =D
thanks for the nomination! 🙂
This is really powerful. Striking.
The last two lines close it really well.
Hi there! Thanks for feeling the heart of this poem! This is also a difficult theme to write. 🙂
Nice one, literally alone (all one) ~ Thanks! Who am I writing to? And I do so love to write…. no matter to whom ~
Hello there! Thanks for taking the time to read and appreciate my poem! I am happy to read your comment! 🙂
this is incredibly sad but greatly expressed
yeah, it is sad…thanks for liking this one! 🙂
Loved the last two lines! Thanks for checking out my blog before, I really appreciate your poetry. I’ve had a demeaning imagination before as well, but better days eventually came; I live in the midst of them now.
Thanks for dropping by and for your kind comment 🙂 I’m glad you can relate to this poem 🙂
What a powerful piece!
I don’t know if this sounds powerful, but thanks for bringing out what you felt while reading it. I appreciate all your comments! 🙂
How “silly” of me thinking I was the persona telling those lines. Your poem transforms into to a figure similar to mine. I can relate to it really well. Wee done.
shiould be “well done”, sorry.
I hate this typos of mine. “should be ‘well done’, sorry.”
There. ; p
haha, it’s OK Shinji, even I have issues on typo error sometimes 🙂
Hi Shinji. Honestly, I was hesitant to post this one, but my candid side brought me to certainty that I need to share this one! I’m glad you can relate to this. Thanks! 🙂
Profound & quite lovely. Great piece!
Hi Monique!
Thanks for dropping-by and liking this one…thanks for leaving your comment, too! 🙂
I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award – please follow the link to find out more http://aplaceforpoetry.wordpress.com/2012/09/16/887/ 🙂
Hi Julia. Thanks for the nomination!
I liked that poem too. The last two lines are particularly good. There isn’t enough poetry about being silly.
Good poem! It seems easy but it is not. It seems sad but it is not, because there is rhythm so there is a cose connection to life.
haha, on the subject of typos, of course I mean close not cose.
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