tears like rain
on april space
tears that say
of departed lovers
the farewell sadness
water drops like
needles of divorce
changing our status
I like the use of the rain/water imagery. The last stanza is stunning. Though with the crazy weather this year, it should be april snow, really. All white in Poland. Greetings from the in-between.
Reblogged this on Into Imaginative Euphoria.
Great metaphor and the line “Needles of divorce” is masterful.
I’m new to your blog but will be back – love this type of poetry
Thanks for visiting and following my blog… Like what I’ve read on yours!
Very nice 🙂 Thanks for visiting Homeflair.
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