space is donut hole
floating beside me
and never whole
a part lacking
what’s to die
the absence of
you and i am
Empty empty empty..
love the line breaks in the last stanza! thanks for liking my posts at sereneartist.
Beautiful expression of that empty feeling. I hope all find those ways to feel whole
Very true – empty but required to make whole. Good one Chester.
High five, Eric
Thak u chester fer the continued ??? Im lost n lonely too in a world of pained eyes lookin for relief 🙂
wow, that was to the point….deep and good all at the same time…
Hi. A blessed day! Smile.
poignant, and also yummy 🙂
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