donut hole

 

space is donut hole
floating beside me
and never whole

a part lacking
is goodbye
what’s to die

the absence of
you and i am
so alone

 

2013

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About chester maynes

poet, and a lover of music and books.
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9 Responses to donut hole

  1. Chatty Owl says:

    Empty empty empty..

  2. Cheryl Rac says:

    love the line breaks in the last stanza! thanks for liking my posts at sereneartist.

  3. Beautiful expression of that empty feeling. I hope all find those ways to feel whole

  4. Eric Alagan says:

    Very true – empty but required to make whole. Good one Chester.

    High five, Eric

  5. Thak u chester fer the continued ??? Im lost n lonely too in a world of pained eyes lookin for relief ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. wow, that was to the point….deep and good all at the same time…

  7. arrowtarget says:

    Hi. A blessed day! Smile.

  8. whythisbox says:

    poignant, and also yummy ๐Ÿ™‚

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