hurt is true
i inflict wild
panic in your
pain is a pool
faces of us
religion is routine
at mornings when
and we wake up half-hearted
good job dude
Sometimes you read something and just really love it. I really love this.
I had fun thinking that through 🙂
The last part, I loved it 🙂 nice job.
Woaw!!!! Awesomazingly written!!!!
The title certainly suits I think. I’m intrigued now and want more info, though the words are beautiful as they stand.
Wow.you gave the title justice.
Thanks for visiting and following my blog. Your poetry is amazing!
Amazing work Chester
beautiful…………. thanks for visiting my blog.
Love it–great images. Your poetry is beautiful.
Hi Chester — thanks for stopping by and following 13th Paradigm. A colorful site you have here with lots of poetry and prose that reads like poetry. Congratulations and all good wishes, Alia
love your style and poetry Chester. thanks for stopping by and following
I inflict wild panic in your quiet world is a great line (as is ‘religion is routine’). I really liked this one, chester 🙂
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