ocean tides roar
my feelings explode
red is anger
i can’t control
this nature
the nature of me
there’s still beauty
the pretty things
feelings explode
i can’t control
the fault in me
i must forgive
2013
ocean tides roar
my feelings explode
red is anger
i can’t control
this nature
the nature of me
there’s still beauty
the pretty things
feelings explode
i can’t control
the fault in me
i must forgive
2013
Me too!!
Awesome! π
Feelings that wash
Away on a tide
Caught in a storm
I cannot ride.
Sweetness and sweat
Like glitter reside
In this heart of mine
In this storm of mine
That I cannot hide.
—
Lovely, in a dark, visceral way. The plainness of the language belies the emotion roiling within.
Keep penning magic.
-Eris
This is amazing! π
sweet….I love the CAPS, lower case TITLING…awesome…
π
“feelings explode
i canβt control”
http://iamforchange.wordpress.com/awards-page-and-nominations-thank-you-i-am-so-honored-and-grateful/ I wanted to share with you and say thank you!
Awesome!!!!! Flowed very well with emotions
There’s still beauty… the pretty things. I enjoyed the poem and felt the emotion.
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magic π