mirror is ghosts of
shaped in thin and fat
we go through
in our playground
changed and abused
I really like this one too!
The last verse is so powerful. Great way to end this and leaves the reading thinking well beyond the read.
Reread the last verse a few times, a powerful end!
C’est la vie – life is full of lessons and learning!
Reblogged this on James' World 2.
That is so touching! Reminded me of my own childhood…..
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Very powerful, Chester! I loved this one, it had a compelling and dramatic feel to it. Sometimes shorter poems have a huge impact (and this is one of them).
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