jUsT aNoThEr BLue

 

sadness entraps
me in denims
tangled in watermelon
shirt and boots
where dandelions
tease the field of
the east

i’m all day me
on this spring afternoon
thinking of your crooked
teeth and pardoned hair

i’m all downtime
idle and free
this is breaking me
just another blue

 

2013

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About chester maynes

poet, and a lover of music and books.
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11 Responses to jUsT aNoThEr BLue

  1. tangled in watermelon. Interesting.

  2. Very cool and creative poem. Keep sharing your gift with the world.

  3. Chatty Owl says:

    The beginning… Oh my! Amazing. Loved those tangled words. “Tease the field of the east@ – genius!

  4. Tina Liu says:

    I like what you did with the title to fit the “tangled” imagery.

  5. i like this, can’t even quite pick out a ‘favourite bit’

  6. One life to Live says:

    loved it!

  7. pardoned hair? good line. 🙂

  8. Elena Carpi says:

    Great piece! Thanks for stopping by my blog and thus introducing me to your work. So awesome.

  9. maryamchahine says:

    unique line – “sadness entraps me in denims”

  10. srennick12 says:

    Crooked teeth and pardoned hair.. detailed descriptions that make your character unique and realistic. I like the concept and burst of emotions.

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