LiNe Of EaSt & WeSt

 

we’re on a line
of east and west
too far to touch
too near to hear
this talk
good sound
as our lips
depart words
of little and big
i love you’s

 

2013

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About chester maynes

poet, and a lover of music and books.
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14 Responses to LiNe Of EaSt & WeSt

  1. dulzimordash says:

    Reblogged this on Spontaneous Creativity.

  2. Oloriel says:

    This is very romantic and lovely!

  3. too near to hear…Love that! Reminds me of when we are too close to a situation to be objective…

  4. kip says:

    First time I’ve come across your blog. Love your unique voice!

  5. nice flow, here, Chester. I liked the idea of the lips departing with words, like kissing goodby to love or greeting it with a smooch, depending on how you interprit the poem. Nicely done!

  6. also liked the line (as mentioned by Diana) ‘too near to hear’. this was a brilliant reflection of an oral version of ‘can’t see the wood for the trees’.

  7. Sherry says:

    worthy of much thinking, this one.

  8. zara M. says:

    departure is love its always painful but with love its different a very Delicious pain
    i loved the way you played with words totally lovely
    thanks for the visit
    best regards

  9. thanks for dropping by and for all your good comments! 🙂 i am on thrill from all your sweet words…so sweet! 🙂

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