night flees slowly
like a stretched song
where the coda is repeated
on and on and on
I like this. It reminds me of Sun Kil Moon’s cover of Modest Mouse’s song “Neverending Math Equation”. It’s a pretty good song. Here’s a youtube link to it, if you have the time and want to listen to it – http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ydNhrHXHjAk
Love the coda line! Nice work! 🙂
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this is so nice. Infinity 🙂
Good one…refreshing imagery. And thanks so much for the follow of my blog! I will be back to read more poems–I love poetry as well. Best.
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I think we all can relate to that image!
So sweetly delicious. Love the choice ‘coda’.
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