if only close to you
but i try to be closer
to the one closest to you
then to get at you
and you have
the better half
and i can’t be
your significant other
floating on a
space where i
sweetly laid my
thoughts of you
myself and wishing
that i am the other half
Incredible ache. I really felt that in the first two stanzas.
I can relate to this a lot at the moment, love it. Thank you for sharing!
Smooth expression of a hunger not satisfied…nice work!
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Love the longing and the sad irony. Life is full of they isn’t it. Wishing you well 🙂
That’s the most honest statement of how it feels to be a young male wanting a woman that I have ever heard.
Thanks for reading my poetry.
My goodness.. This grabbed my heartstrings and held on! I cannot tell you how lovely this is! Caro
Thanks Caro 🙂