in a space
where no one
i feel them
them on a
face but your
i see them
you can’t hide
i know them
because i am one of them
This is really raw. Beautifully written.
it reminded me of I know you by Henry Rollins 🙂 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vj-B42gXcoQ
So simple and good !
You write beautiful serene poems. Lovely.
Simple, but moving!
i saw what you did there. nice one bro. i like it 🙂
So true. Aren’t we all the same in this. Beautiful poem.
Oh, wow. I’m at a loss for words. Brilliant!
thanks for all your appreciation. your comments mean so much to me! 🙂
well done … exceptional.
Reblogged this on writing the journey and commented:
simple, beautiful, powerful
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