you keep
your burdens
in a space
where no one
can see
i feel them
you mask
them on a
face but your
eyes radiate
them
i see them
you can’t hide
the obvious
you can’t
i know them
because i am one of them
2013
you keep
your burdens
in a space
where no one
can see
i feel them
you mask
them on a
face but your
eyes radiate
them
i see them
you can’t hide
the obvious
you can’t
i know them
because i am one of them
2013
This is really raw. Beautifully written.
thanks! 🙂
it reminded me of I know you by Henry Rollins 🙂 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vj-B42gXcoQ
So simple and good !
You write beautiful serene poems. Lovely.
Simple, but moving!
Cool, bro
Beautiful Poem
i saw what you did there. nice one bro. i like it 🙂
Thank you
So true. Aren’t we all the same in this. Beautiful poem.
Oh, wow. I’m at a loss for words. Brilliant!
thanks for all your appreciation. your comments mean so much to me! 🙂
Beautiful indeed!
well done … exceptional.
wow
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simple, beautiful, powerful