sordid you

you made me
broken and mad

so sad
you hurt me
lonely and no

i was fine
until you
deleted the

love was
torn to many

leaving me

sordid you
sordid crime
killed our dreams




About chester maynes

poet, and a lover of music and books.
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8 Responses to sordid you

  1. Simplistically dark. Wonderful.

  2. amoafowaa says:

    Well painted heartache. We can all identify with it.

  3. The trick is to say as much as possible in the shortest possible apce with the fewest words.And that’s what you do here.

  4. I felt this. That was beautiful.

  5. Moongazer says:

    That fits πŸ™‚

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