you made me
broken and mad
you hurt me
lonely and no
i was fine
torn to many
killed our dreams
Simplistically dark. Wonderful.
thanks! appreciate so much your comment! 🙂
Well painted heartache. We can all identify with it.
The trick is to say as much as possible in the shortest possible apce with the fewest words.And that’s what you do here.
I felt this. That was beautiful.
That fits 🙂
oh yeah, indeed! thanks, btw! 🙂
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