mystery in
your eyes
fiery as
candle flames
burning my
state of solitary
incarcerated in your
superficial bounds
your puzzling
persona
pondering me
interrogations
the origin of you
is bedazzled
i cannot
formulate
assumptions
2012
Ā
mystery in
your eyes
fiery as
candle flames
burning my
state of solitary
incarcerated in your
superficial bounds
your puzzling
persona
pondering me
interrogations
the origin of you
is bedazzled
i cannot
formulate
assumptions
2012
Ā
Gorgeous. Again.
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Really good!
Rarely good too…
Captivating, Chester, absolutely love the simplicity yet raw power š
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Captivating, Chester, absolutely love the simplicity yet raw power “
beautiful poem
Thank You David! š
I’ve nominated you for a Reader Appreciation Award, yay! See here:
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thanks Lilian! š
Really enjoyed this. Like the line breaks and images. First four lines really bring me in.
Danny, another thank you! š
Thank you for following my blog. I appreciate your play with language.
thank you, too! š
I love how you use your words, reminds me of myself. I enjoyed your poem.
thanks Dreya for loving this one! thanks for taking the time to drop-by and commenting, too! š
I read your poem to Blossum, seemed appropriate.
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I like this piece š