Come to me from the grave.
Cure my heartbroken self.
Listen to my mortal cries.
Embrace me in the night.
It was the day when I lost you.
I stood in misery and felt the wounds.
Everything spun to nothing.
The day you left, I died.
May the gods save me here.
Other than loving you,
I’ve nothing to love.
And this unloved, I’ve died.
I won’t see, nor hear you.
The day you left, I died.
And dying is seeing no tomorrow.
You need to know that I need you more.
2012
Very touching.
Hi RoSy, thanks for dropping by again! 🙂
Love the line: “Everything spun to nothing.”
Very evocative.
Hi Ellen! Thanks for liking this one! 🙂
sentimental..expressed well
thanks so much for liking this poem! 🙂
Depressing. Chester, please take time to recover from loss and longing. Find a way through words and friends to bring sunshine into your life.
I’m good Susan, thanks by the way! 🙂
I am with susan…we need to resurrect you 🙂 keep writing and be well!
Oh yeah, thanks really! 🙂
Writing is so cathartic! I hope your pen will bring you through this difficult time. I am so sorry for your loss.
Oh Jennifer, I’m good…it’s just me and my fictional mind! 🙂
Beautiful 🙂
thanks Ash! 🙂
This is a wonderful poem. Thanks a lot chester for stopping by my blog and following it too 🙂
You’re welcome and many thanks too! 🙂
🙂
Deeply touching,words can help so much.
Yeah Gary. Thanks for dropping by here 🙂
Please tell me this fictional, feels awfully painful …
it’s just a story from a random imagination 🙂
thank god … brilliant
many thanks for dropping by and liking my poem! 🙂
I have been through a similar situation ans your words hit a nerve ! Well expressed I might add 😀
yeah Mennah! thanks for liking this and I hope you have moved on and recovered! 🙂
Been trying!! Hope you did as well 😀
an equality of insight
yeah, thanks for reading and liking this! 🙂
Thank you for enjoying my Blog! Keep up the with the writing! 😉
http://www.jentendesigns.net
you’re welcome Jeni, and thanks to you too! 🙂
Wow- this is amazing 🙂
thanks for dropping by and for liking this one! 🙂
Beautiful but very sad at the time.
Hi Tricia! Thanks for liking this! 🙂
I loved it…and I wanted to let you know
I really appreciate it! 🙂
The emotional upsurge when the love one is lost is really very upsetting. It upsets the entire life cycle. The emotional depictions in the above poem is really great.
Exactly! Thanks for giving your thoughts on this. I really appreciate it! 🙂
Thanks for sharing. Evocative words that resonates.
Thanks also for visiting my blog and for appreciating this 🙂