when silence outside
is the remedy of a
chaos mind
these feet slip from
the agnostic sleep
and bed is rejected
afraid to get drunk
escaping from the pain
what sight forlorn
even the full bright
of the moon embarks a weep
not anyone shares his burden
so fully misunderstood
unseen in the
suffering of a bachelor
and this bard is a
disappearing shadow
so much attained
the morrow approaches
evading the rising of the sun
leaving only the footsteps
on the earth that smells green
2013
Beautiful!!!
I Can’t tell you how many times in my Life i have felt exactly the way your poem describes and i could not explain it simply in words or even in my own thoughts. This is a very aw inspiring Piece on the darker side of Poetry which is what i crave! You have adopted a new fan for life. Thanks for the Like and Follow BTW.
~ Shane
thanks too Shane! you made me smile today 🙂
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I like!
These are powerful words strung together. Much raw emotion. I really love it.
Beautifully written 🙂 -Katie
I really really like this. Your words convey a meaning and emotion that not many words can.
There’s a hint of Dylan Thomas in this.
beautiful….. 🙂
Stunning’nn
Wow! You are really good at poetry
🙂 thanks
Superb, pal. Nicely done 🙂
Lovely. May I reblog?
Yeah sure you can 🙂
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Many thanks 😉